Different Chambers Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Different Chambers

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Heart has different chambers
For loving friend and members
Come forward and make it beat
It is nice place to stand and greet

Heart may confine
With an art to define
It may nicely breathe
With one beat till death

It mixed with one another
Life become easy to shoulder
The path become easy
And journey keeps busy

It is nice feeling
Also comes as willing
It is great development to take place
It is also important to make happiness

Even though mind has to agree
And heart has to make it free
It is certainly a blessing
That makes it no more amusing

The feelings come naturally
Even though words are spoken orally
It matters more when heard personally
The closeness and fondness is felt really

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 October 2013

Heart has different chambers For loving friend and members

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 October 2013

You and Ashraful Musaddeq like this. Ashraful Musaddeq. The feelings come naturally Even though words are spoken orally a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 October 2013

Dominic Thattil9 minutes ago Nice sentiment

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 October 2013

Sleeping Beauty8 minutes ago Quite complex Comment +1 Nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 October 2013

Mitos Jane Nepomuceno MuchAs gracias.! You are indeed an amazing poet :) 3 hours ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 October 2013

Great Benjamin Lamoore1 minute ago Good choice of words to make this go together Comment 0 nice start

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 October 2013

Often Honest8 minutes ago a little to cute for my tastes. Comment 0 True.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 October 2013

Matthew C. Merz2 minutes ago Liked it.(:

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 October 2013

Be natural! Phanibhusan Basu4 minutes ago and let the feelings come naturally. Comment +1 :) t

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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