Dig It, Baby Poem by Scotty Dogg

Dig It, Baby

Rating: 2.1


Crawling towards the round spot of light,
(a spot light)
in the middle of the floor; (everything
else black) you start digging
the carpet
with your fingernails, scratching orange
fibers. Fur is flying and
shards of padding
hit the ceiling. You dig like a backhoe in
chocolate ice cream,
trying to get back into her.
Now, you scrape through
hardwood floors and black concrete the
hole is getting deeper; finally hitting sweet
green grass;
you keep it going with a
frown. Digging, digging,
digging past the
forefathers, grandfathers, grandmothers
Past:
Edger Allen Poe, Dante, Mr. Cummings,
Ted Williams, American Indians.
Past dog
bones. Past locomotives that became
washing machines.
Only your feet and ankles are
visible now sticking out of your
hole! In your room,
I stroll over. I tickle those toes.
You shake. In your hole, I hear you
giggle.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ellias Anderson Jr. 15 August 2012

nice...The ending is fantastic. this poem has a shark pointing. the pointing is to the past time. the people of past that their dairies are in the depth part of our minds. well done.

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Ellen Shaw 08 April 2012

I love how this poem gets deeper as you read on and then ends in a light hearted way.

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Bulletcookie 2017 20 December 2011

'You dig like a backhoe in chocolate ice cream, ... Past: Edger Allen Poe, Dante, Mr. Cummings, Ted Williams, American Indians.' A very effective archeology of words and feelings! Thanks.

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