Aiden Florence

Rookie (Los Angels)

Dimensions I Can't Control


Maybe someday I will be more than love
And just memories
Maybe someday roses will be more than lovable
And just memories

Your senses failing and my tension's rising
Fading memories are taking over
And you're losing control

Maybe someday this will be more than nightmare
And just memories
Maybe someday you will be more than nightmarish
And just memories

Your heart's failing and my mind's breaking
Remorseful memories are taking over
And you're losing control

Maybe someday voices will be more than adorable
And just memories
Maybe someday memories will be more than beautiful
And still just be memories

Your thoughts are moving and my effort's losing
Your mind is beyond my reach in a dimension
A dimension that I can't control…

Maybe I don't want to control
And just fight it
Maybe I don't want to control
And just beat it

Maybe I just want to save you
From the memories
Maybe I just want to free you
From the memories

Your back in control for the 24 seconds of your life
You break out of fear for the 24 seconds of your life
Your voices communicate meaningful words
'I Miss You'
And your mind is taken over again

Submitted: Saturday, February 24, 2007
Edited: Saturday, January 22, 2011

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Comments about this poem (Dimensions I Can't Control by Aiden Florence )

  • Rookie Janelle Morehart (6/25/2007 6:24:00 PM)

    Wow.....This poem..I will be truthful it makes my heart ache. It hits a key in your mind when You read it. A painful key, though the feeling hurts and brings remorse it only brings this poem praise. A poem that can channel into someones heart and mind, effecting them to remember something similar makes this poem beyong wonderful. It is a poem for the soul. No matter what anyone says or does keep writing and let your words be known. You will not die unloved nor unknown. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aldo Kraas (2/24/2007 5:09:00 PM)

    This poem ia wonderful
    Nice job
    Well done (Report) Reply

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