Disappointed Poem by Hm. Nes

Disappointed



Odin's saint in ides past tide,
Tans did don and tines atop,
Sped to sea- Iona's sand,
Tis a Dane's appointed spot.

Spied stone nest- Iona's point,
Apt a Paddies' papist den.
Antes paid and patens stand;
Pope's deposit add, distend.

Danes adept to posit pain,
Pats inside, no spine to tap.
One dead saint, one tepid Dane
Dips in spade to depot sap.

Sodden sot, a stein at tap,
On to nap; a despot paid.
Nastied diet o' pints and pain,
Ope disdain on Paddies staid.

Paddies' ain son tied to dais,
Ode indites and so to tone,
Pine, despond: "Inept to aid,
O One, Iona's Odin? "

Ode inapposite to tone,
As painted ponies on a spin,
Pine, despond: "Inept to aid,
O One, Iona's Odin? "

Paddies' disappointed son,
‘Spite disdain did Dane adopt.
Neat and poised in din o' snide,
Pat's son sat aside oats pot,

Opined:
Iona's Odin sent a son-
Odd idea, O Odin One.
Paid deposit. Sin atoned.
Stopped sedition. Said, ‘It's done! '

Dis-appointed Paddies' son-
Iona's Odin opted:
Sion stained Iona's sand,
And Dane instead appointed.


[All 183 words above are derived from (and limited to)the 12 letters of the word ‘disappointed.' Only the repeated letters in ‘disappointed'- ‘d' ‘i' and ‘p', are repeated in a single word of the poem.]

Monday, November 30, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: gospel,sovereignty
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