Discipline Poem by Vaishnavi Singh

Discipline

Rating: 4.3


March on your toe,
with the head towards time;
Work with your hands,
with your heart looking at time.

A second missed is time lost,
Never be late at any cost.
Different duty, different time,
But all sing the same rhyme.

Waiting to see one good scene
will wash out the upcoming ones
Towards discipline if you lean,
will earn you the best ones.

Discipline is where value of time exists,
Desire is dream where discipline doesn't exists.
Don't confuse your mind now,
But do your work in time any how.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I have written this story keeping in mind the lazy schedule nowadays. In this story discipline is referred to the right utilization of time and its less wastage. Where there is discipline, importance of time is understood. Where it is not, one cannot get what he/she desires.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
April Pearl 26 December 2013

good one..could write better

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Captain Herbert Poetry 11 November 2013

Beautiful and perfect rhyme. Please also comment and vote to my poems

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Discipline and stipulating time for once duty is a beautiful subject and by this there is a good poem here which likes much.

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Debdip Maitra 12 November 2013

Great work.... Would have loved if the same word wasn't repeated so much in the 3rd para..... But kudos for perfect rhyming.... Plz do read and comment on my works as well..... :)

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Akshat Uniyal 01 August 2018

awesome poem. you have a great sense of poetry. loved the last stanza. All the best in life :)

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GHi 28 March 2022

Nove

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Geetanjali Halsi 25 October 2021

👍👍👍

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nuha 15 September 2021

it help me so much...

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Taran 06 April 2019

m Poemhunter.com

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alishba 01 February 2019

ur poems are owesome....big fan

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