Discordant Voice Poem by Jabulani Mzinyathi

Discordant Voice

Rating: 4.3


when you sing the sweet melodies
mine will be the discordant voice
hold you by the scruff of the neck
repeatedly shaking the conscience
the conscience you now trample
under the jackboot of your gullibility
drenched by the water cannons of fear

see the rising storms of poverty
desperation walking along the streets
hunger thunder rumbling in the bellies
the mountains of hopelessness rising
lives decimated by scythes of diseases
hoping that the sun will shine once more
that there will be reverberations of laughter

Discordant Voice
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
now surrounded by waves of despair, hope refuses to die. that is the drug we need as we go through tough times. out of great heat and pressure we get diamonds. as peter tosh says ' i am a firm ripe diamond you cannot move i at all...' igziabeher yimasagan
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siddartha Montik 01 June 2017

Very Beautifully Expressed.. Strong words and vivid Write! ! Thank you for sharing Poet 10++++!

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B.m. Biswas 01 June 2017

Congratulations... Love it and enjoy it... Very optimistic poem.

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Tom Allport 01 June 2017

a poem with a strong message of hope for a better more sharing world in which to live? .............superbly written.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 June 2017

The sun will shine once more..... congrats on being chosen.. a big 10+++++++

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Tribhawan Kaul 01 June 2017

Beautiful poem creating awareness towards the miseries shaking the conscienouness of the unawared ending with a hope, which always sustain lives.

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Philani Ndlela 28 July 2018

Reminds me of Dambudzo. Good Rich stuff

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Jabulani Mzinyathi 03 June 2017

any poet needs the critics. am no exception

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 June 2017

Though its a sad poem about poverty and despair it ends with a positive note. That is what makes the poem interesting in the end. Very nice and Congrats.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 June 2017

Poverty! ! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Gajanan Mishra 01 June 2017

the sun is there to shine only

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