Discovering A Will Poem by Tony Stadick

Discovering A Will

Rating: 5.0


Snow blown covered thoughts,
With warm conclusion in the wind,
Today we start tommorow,
And so far we never end,
Born to rise in time,
Till death we starve for more,
Truth be told we stumble,
As we search for what were for,
Find this then you'll follow,
What you wanted in the first,
A place to call your home,
And a cup to quench your thirst,
Old, wornout, and brittle,
In this chair you'll breathe your last,
Still worn through with worry,
Their's no time to live the past.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Not a member No 4 22 December 2006

Good eanswer to the big question but how many would be satisfied with it? And great poetry by the way. Keep them coming. jim

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Suzan Gumush 22 December 2006

Excellent poem give you ten. best wishes suzan

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Matthew Ward 22 December 2006

An interesting little poem that ends with a peculiar hinge on a door sweeping open to possibilities. Well done!

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