Discussing Their Disgust Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Discussing Their Disgust



In the valleys where shadows exist,
Those who have made their choices...
Selected to pick,
Should not complain...
Of less light to find,
Upon them to shine.
When a climbing up and away,
From a darkness that delays...
Takes motivation and initiative,
With a desire to move up and towards,
The light.
To know a better life wished,
Doesnt come to anyone...
Believing that a drifting,
Back and forth in valleys...
Discussing with others their disgust,
Of it.
Will always discover discouragement,
And plenty of time to procrastinate.
To accept as an incentive.

Friday, September 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 17 September 2016

It takes motivation and initiative. Moving towards light is definitely fantastic. Amazing drafting is shared really.

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