Dissapear Poem by Julian Spence

Dissapear

Rating: 4.5


oh how the wild wintery weather hath come and filled in the empty crevases withen my heart.

where the bleeding and weeping memories have just simply fallen apart.

frusterated and dilusionally in pain, in pain of another horrid loss. where more mourning will soon reside.

then to be shamelessly replaced by more fake and decieving displays, that only cover emotions.

something of such a matter could be easily avoided with a good mind.

but only if i had one, a better mind at that. wouldnt you say then, that i'd be fine?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Farah Ilyas 12 May 2011

nice one...........it is full of sorrow & disappear......... readers themselves feels induldge in this poe..... gud composition read my poem 'his eyes' & leave a comment

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Farah Ilyas 12 May 2011

nice one...........it is full of sorrow & disappear......... readers themselves feels induldge in this poe..... gud composition read my poem 'his eyes' & leave a comment

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 12 May 2011

Nice poem. Rich in depth and imagery. Beautifully conceived. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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