Divergence Poem by Farah Ilyas

Divergence

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Which one day my divergence will tenacitied? ? ?
Being chased by grim belief & nostalgia of sting

With luminous eyes & notion in mind, , , , , ,
He is asking and am being asked.


Will sacrament of society will kept on spoiling our life?
Or
Is it feasible?
That

We enlighten our life with the divine supremacy of love
And
Admit each other as we are….

Farah Ilyas.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 19 May 2012

good write, i enjoyed

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 08 June 2012

Whoooa. You're an enjoyable poet. I love your syntax, they're of authority. Really nice.

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Rodney Vali 08 June 2012

I enjoyed reading this poem, great write

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Captain Cur 08 June 2012

Admit each other as we are, A beautiful ending to this poem Thoughtful and strong

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Raja Nosherwan 09 June 2012

A strong and prosperous poem, you have strong emotions. Keep writing.

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Sallam Yassin 28 June 2013

great message of love As Allah created For love not for hate we enlightened with your divine message thanks

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Jahan Zeb 10 June 2013

Very strong language. The theme is grand and the message is conveyed in a nice flow. It's helping.

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Yasmin Khan 11 May 2013

Divine supremacy of love makes us to conquer over sacrament of society....a beautiful theme!

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Mohammad Muzzammil 10 June 2012

Nice poem having pretty lines and it also has fine imagery.

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Unwritten Soul 10 June 2012

Wonderful and strong projection in few lines, that's really cool and it really a strong poem! keep it up and thanks for inviting! ! :) _Unwritten Soul

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Farah Ilyas

Farah Ilyas

Faisalabad, Pakistan
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