Treasure Island

Unwritten Soul


Divide Two Lights (Between Me)


By walking days
Tirelessly on the months' cycle
Yet completing another year circle
For another run ready to come
To be in my life journey
A new chapter for me
Pages to be revealed
My unwritten story
Days in mystery
In a draft of destiny
About life, they, you and me

A glance of time
The moment i stand now
Like a race between the phases
Move me in the intermediate space
Within a second
Between the minutes
At a division line
Separating me
From flowing times
Of the Past,
Present and future
My all years

Relaying time
Along the clock wheels
Sound stitched to the sky
Counting for a door of two
To be opened for a second
Of past to a new beginning
A transition, evening to morning
The exchanging moments
Continuing world tour
From older east to past west
With dwilights of midnight
And day renews life

A second ago
The night has closed
The end of another chapter
A new second now
Time delivers another chapter
Anew one in unfolded paper
To be written on secrecy of future
In three hunderd sixty five pages
With lights and dark, days and nights
With the ink of mystery, unwritten to eyes
Our adventure to go and to be experienced

Spherical light
Orbiting the moon bright
Kiss me, sleepless in a solitary night
Even the sky painted with sparkling light
And firework bursting the joys
I am belong to somewhere else
Not the night i am stay now
But with all moments i had
In a silence and quietness
To think, live, to think
What we've lost in past
We've never return again
For the dreams that broken
We must claim back to the future
The lost we had, The gain we will have
In a new opening days
what we gain we shall cheers
A day for no give up
before the chapter changed again
I wont surrender, no i wont

A new year has come
Yet old dreams to hunt
So i run run and run
Till all dreams i'm done

My new year, you finally come

Submitted: Monday, January 21, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, January 22, 2013

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

What do you think this poem is about?



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poet's Notes about The Poem

: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
This is a poem i wrote for A New Year, it has my identity of
my soul, and how i want to tell, if we have dreams of past
and unfinished, have no worry still we can get it by this year
so if we keep mourning, it will remain nothing, so keep hunting
without surrendering your fate to the time of uncertainties
~Unwritten Soul~
: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :

Comments about this poem (Divide Two Lights (Between Me) by Unwritten Soul )

Enter the verification code :

  • * Sunprincess * (2/5/2014 6:57:00 PM)

    .........I am sure soul you are accomplishing your dreams....this is a beautiful write
    and I enjoyed it much....love this one... (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (2/17/2013 5:33:00 AM)

    Youthful anticipation energizes this fabulous poem with allusions to the mysterious nature of time. (Report) Reply

  • Rekha Mandagere (2/4/2013 12:58:00 AM)

    The relationship between life and time is fantastically brought out. Nothing is lost but we can fulfill all dreams of life this time, if not during the next interval of time. This poem teaches us lot of patience and gives hope to be always friendly with moving time. Nice work: -) (Report) Reply

  • Paul Brookes (2/2/2013 3:14:00 AM)

    So beautiful and full of meaning Sometimes though you need to stand still to know where your'e running to or from
    Nice write BB : O) (Report) Reply

  • Poetheart Morgan (1/27/2013 7:34:00 AM)

    Neither one wants, you can not give up. Human nature drives us ever forward. Even in small steps. TFS Soul! (Report) Reply

  • Kieran J96 (1/24/2013 10:46:00 AM)

    not too sure what to say, its really entrancing to be honest, captures you and bring to the front your own fears and anxieties, great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (1/24/2013 7:24:00 AM)

    So much meaning and thought in your work your are such a thoughtful caring Soul. I feel I can hear you speak these words. (Report) Reply

  • Nimal Dunuhinga (1/23/2013 11:34:00 AM)

    the contrast between the light and darkness! A new year has come
    Yet old dreams to hunt................................! (Report) Reply

  • Nimal Dunuhinga (1/23/2013 11:33:00 AM)

    the contrast between the light and darkness! A new year has come
    Yet old dreams to hunt................................! (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri (1/23/2013 9:40:00 AM)

    unseen future has come and we get a step closer to our end line.that s why a new year frightens us.the present moment is like an edge between past and future.we have to take care not to fall in to each side.not think about past and not be afraid of future too much.live in the moment.
    it is a little bit regrettable.a season of our lives is closed and a new one is begun.but we must know that

    Time waites for nobody
    neither me nor you buddy
    we have to take care of our souls
    so pursuit in life our goals

    some day we see that our lives are rolled by and we see how fast it becomes last.
    nice poem soul.lots of fresh impressive feelings it gave me.brilliant one
    ~nb (Report) Reply

  • Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (1/23/2013 9:24:00 AM)

    pages of light and the dark! This poem is written based on the concept of light and the book. Beautiful and I enjoyed reading this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath (1/22/2013 10:06:00 PM)

    Soul,
    I adore your positive attitude to life and all.This is the thing we need most and we lack also.More and more is nothing but the hedonism which makes us mournful if we don't get the cherished things.Thanks for focusing on this theme.
    Best Wishes
    H.H (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (1/22/2013 12:18:00 PM)

    A second ago
    The night has closed
    The end of another chapter
    A new second now
    Time delivers another chapter
    Anew one in unfolded paper
    To be written on secrecy of future
    In three hunderd sixty five pages
    With lights and dark, days and nights
    With the ink of mystery, unwritten to eyes
    Our adventure to go and to be experienced

    imaginative, a bit soulful and montage captured very well
    cheers (Report) Reply

  • Michael Oliver (1/22/2013 10:20:00 AM)

    I can resonate with the feel of this poem- the piquancy between regret and expectation - thank you (Report) Reply

  • Thomas A Robinson (1/21/2013 11:22:00 PM)

    The present is a razors edge.On the one side tumbles down our past.
    On the other side our future is rushing up to greet us.
    The only real thing in our present is our love and memories surrounded by our fears.
    Everything that has been and everything to come are the shadows we can never touch. (Report) Reply

Read all 20 comments »

PoemHunter.com Updates

New Poems

  1. Who Are You, Tone Lyriker
  2. Rossette, Naveed Khalid
  3. tell sadness to catch the next bus, Mandolyn ...
  4. You and I, David Clinch
  5. The Beggar, David Clinch
  6. Just Wait, Alyssa Alexander
  7. Miep - A Woman of Courage, David Clinch
  8. Exam Time (for the girl who struggled), David Clinch
  9. A Cottage Hill, Naveed Khalid
  10. Keep Me Moored to the Harbour, David Clinch

Poem of the Day

poet Walt Whitman

ARM’D year! year of the struggle!
No dainty rhymes or sentimental love verses for you, terrible year!
Not you as some pale poetling, seated at a desk, lisping cadenzas
piano;
...... Read complete »

   

Trending Poems

  1. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  2. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  3. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  4. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  5. Identity, Cyrus Diaz
  6. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  7. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings, Maya Angelou
  8. 1861, Walt Whitman
  9. Alone, Maya Angelou
  10. Fire and Ice, Robert Frost

Trending Poets

[Hata Bildir]