Divided And Broken Poem by dani fries

Divided And Broken

Rating: 5.0


when you love its hard
crawl, walk, and run 3 easy steps for you
frendship, feelings then you know its true
but hard when the persone dosent
feel the same about you
divided in half
but broken for the feelings you had

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Kayla Dufault 20 June 2009

I know those feelings all to well... If you read some of my work it tells you about it lol anywayz awesome writings so very true yet so sad...yet that is life i guess

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Shekhar Joshi 19 June 2009

yeah so very true.............it hurts when the other person don't understand what love u have for him/her.............excellent.............cheers ;)

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short, sweet and well done poem..

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