Divine Poem by Deepak Calyampoondi

Divine

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Free lunches is a not,
Forget not what we brought,
We are here to make a change,
Good thoughts is what we exchange.

We think we have won,
Yet we are again born,
Pray that we will merge someday,
And as light we will emerge oneday.

The purpose now is to give that light,
To make the others lives bright,
Then as a star you shall shine,
And the world will call you divine.

Open yourself to receive the grace,
Be kind to your enemies to win the race,
There is nothing so noble in war and cry,
There is no failure unless you not try.

People are people who are meant to stray,
So you are chosen to guide and stay,
As steady as the strongest sail against the stormy winds,
And be their guiding angel until they win.

Saturday, April 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 25 June 2017

Wonderful endings of the lines How much time you would have spend to write like that. is to give that light, world will call you divine. nothing so noble in war and cry, be their guiding angel so many points i collected from your poem after reading it carefully. So many good points. You are a good moralist and spiritual in your views. Thank u for spreading such ideas. Thank you.

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Dev Anand 25 June 2017

Wonderful endings of the lines How much time you would have spend to write like that. is to give that light, world will call you divine. nothing so noble in war and cry, be their guiding angel so many points i collected from your poem after reading it carefully. So many good points. You are a good moralist and spiritual in your views. Thank u for spreading such ideas. Thank you. tony

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Be kind to your enemies to win the race, a good poem.

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Be kind to your enemies to win the race, a nice thought, a good poem.

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