Divorce - Another Matter Of Course (The Storm Brews) Poem by Daniel Partlow

Divorce - Another Matter Of Course (The Storm Brews)

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Why has Divorce
Become such a matter of course?
Currents of unyielding force
Deep is thy chaotic course…
Thy plutonian source.

Why would we willingly break
Our families and sacrament forsake?
In the waters lies a cavernous intake
Named Sin, which leads to Vulcan’s lake.
The waters of iniquity awake.

Desperate acts come bearing woe,
When the opening to Sin begins to grow.
The first sign doth this tempest show:
The generous trades fail to blow
Distraction of el Diablo.

Unrealistic entitlement and want combine.
In loss of true respect – now all things decline.
Under the surface, heat builds in thermocline.
And causes upwellings of hot unhealthy brine.
The failing catch is the next ensign.

When loving desire turns to unholy craving
Then communication turns to rant and raving
Typhoons and droughts: all climes are misbehaving.
El Nino entrenched: the atmospheres enslaving…
But rescuers are still out there saving.

A man sustains the family with arms and back and soul.
The wife sustains with many a beautiful and natural role.
But when cloud defrauds the field it is a dry and dusty bowl.
Like all the fragrant fruit blossoms the hoarfrost stole.
And lovely forests all reduced to coal.

For many of us, the selflessness of ‘We’
Has become the selfishness of ‘Me’
But though a boat untethered from the dock is ‘free’
When the waves and gales come, it is lost at sea.
Biffed and wrecked unmercifully.



Because:
A broken cycle is Pride and hubris
Conceited Lucifer’s superbian fret.
Frigid storms of ice go to the Envious
Covetous Leviathan’s waters fete.
A raging fire, choking and sulpherous;
For perverted Asmodeus’s Lusty internet.
The boiling Greed of debt and avarice
Fraudulent Mammon’s casino bet.
A pit of snakes unto Sloth, apathetic and venomous
Deceptive Belphegor’s television set.
A meal of rats and toads for the Gluttonous,
Pushing Beelzebub’s addictive cravings whet.
Dismemberment of all blessed goodness
Hateful Satan’s Wrath doth get.

So take wisdom with thy spouse and mutual charity
And let thy matrimonial bond be a strong chord of three
Thou, thy spouse, and God, with vigilant constancy,
Compassion, duty, humility, love, and sobriety,
And enjoy thy blissful harmony


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
alysha renee' 08 September 2007

yes, i do understand that divorce is becoming an answer to many problems and relationships, but your poem..... i mean u sound so bias, if we'd continue to think like we'd still be in cave man days....newsflash there are a lot of single parent families that are happy, where the woman is the single parent not becuz the husband died but becuz of divorce......sometimes divorce is needed some ppl just don't need to be together but they might just be finding that out so i c what your saying but at times divorce is necessary okay youth doesn't always equal ignorance, stupidity, and selfishness in many cases we hold more wisdom than u could even dream of....so yeah ur poem's nice and it's free flowing- if that's what u want to call it but u still dont hit the underlying truth- so before u start to criticize get your facts straight okay

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Elysabeth Faslund 25 August 2007

Even though this poem does say a lot...there is much more beneath it's surface that can be spotted, read-in, for it does have an undercurrent. Not just the tumultous El Nino on the surface. We all came from the water...shouldn't we be able to wed El Nino, direct it's faults into virtue...for some parts of it is, indeed virtuous. The good and the bad...one does not exist without the other in the background. The marriage, in reality...it's storms and serenity. HIGHLY interesting read! ! Good going, Daniel! ! ! xxElysabeth

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Lyrical_Lie 28 25 August 2007

Thank you for the comment you left on my poem! After reading yours and seeing how brilliant it was, I started to wonder why you left that comment on my poem! Great write.

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Anastacia Podarevska 02 May 2007

Sins are a part of life, just like betrayal is a part of love. It could never be any other way- we're human. No amount of religion, morals, beliefs, or 'love' is going to change us from the selfish creatures we are. Everything we do, however underlying, the reason we do it is to benefit and please OURSELVES. I understand the point you're making, you seem to know what you're talking about. I can't say I agree with everything you've just said, however.

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Tiffany Saxon 13 February 2007

wow! this poem hit me hard! i've been there, so i do understand. outstanding poem!

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Daniel Partlow

Daniel Partlow

St. Louis, MO > Westport, CT
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