Cierrah Smiles


Do - Poem by Cierrah Smiles

In your mind you picture your life and how it will end up,
You think about the dreams you have and wishes you made,
I try to think realistic but I can't help but think about that one dream,
I think of the factors and outcomes of it all,
But what if the is no bad factors,
Do you give up if its hard,
Do you let fear get in the way or do you strive for that wish
And do what you can and possibly succeed


Comments about Do by Cierrah Smiles

  • Rookie - 184 Points Vizard Dhawan (11/19/2012 8:44:00 PM)

    new generation will salute you with words as u write so truely...
    keep it up.. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,284 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (10/12/2012 10:56:00 PM)

    without dreams Cierrah, there is no life.There will be many dreams to make up a life.
    Some will be big some small.You start out reaching for your dreams.Sometimes you
    stumble and fall.That's when you get up dust you and your dreams off and go on.
    In the end Cierrah, we sleep with our dreams as we lie down and pull the gray clouds
    over us ang go to sleep forever. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 139 Points Romeo Della Valle (10/11/2012 10:42:00 PM)

    A very deep and thought provoking write coming from a very talented young poetess with a great potential to make it all the way to the top one day if there is persistence in the writing field! ! Proud of you Cierrah! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 9, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 10, 2012


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