Treasure Island

Shahzia Batool

(Pakistan)

Do not say Goodbye again!


Don't increase
my suffering, pain;
do not say goodbye again!
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  • Passionate Reader (7/2/2013 7:06:00 AM)

    It's hard to say Goodbye and when it comes to family and friends then it becomes painful. Pictures can never replace the being there just like words can never replace true feelings! ! ! So YES

    'i love to see you all the time'
    this says to you my eyes' rain...
    do not say goodbye again...

    Great write! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (6/13/2013 11:37:00 AM)

    good-bye is a painful word to hear. One should really understand what he is saying when he says good-bye. nice write (Report) Reply

  • Yasmeen Khan (4/23/2013 10:55:00 AM)

    It is so painful to say goodbye. This piece is steeped in love and compassion, a cry from the hearts that we don't want our dear ones to leave us. It's an emotional write. (Report) Reply

  • Shumaila Bari (6/22/2012 2:00:00 AM)

    nice one. what if you write in free verse. i feel free verse more flexible to expression. (Report) Reply

  • Captain Cur (5/24/2012 6:38:00 PM)

    Very touching poem about the difficulty of separation.
    Not knowing when we will see out friends or loved ones. (Report) Reply

  • Jasbir Chatterjee (5/22/2012 12:13:00 AM)

    Nice poem, Shahzia...saying goodbye or not saying Goodbye is immaterial...we always have our memories to fall back on and our work to keep us occupied... (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (4/13/2012 8:55:00 AM)

    real good by is very difficult to say or to hear from the dear and near ones....your poems are of love and affections which have eternal values...... (Report) Reply

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