Do Not Tell Me Poem by Laurie hill
Do Not Tell Me
Do not tell me who to love,
dont you even dare,
dont perceive to know my heart,
dont pretend to care,
my heart was yours and yours alone
my dreams were all for you
dreams broken in anothers arms,
why couldn't you stay true? ,
Was it really such a thrill,
to cheat and sore decieve,
And yet you said you loved me still,
You thought i'd still believe?
So do not try to interfere,
dont say, she's not the one,
Your lies i never wish to hear,
your lies, this damage, done.
Do not try to take my hand,
I couldn't bear your touch,
Or try to take me in your arms,
which I once loved so much.
Do not look at me that way,
the way you used to do,
It only proves unto my soul,
The one I love, , ...Is you.
Excellent flowing write filled with strength...liking the last two lines...10+
Another heart felt write, wonderful imagery, nice flow, A great depth of emotion.Beautiful, you Brits sure can write poetry I love it, a 10
This is a touching story, my friend, very natural and written straight from the heart. It's a sad romance but very well penned as always.: -)
This beautifully written poem simply flows and unfolds a beautiful love story, that is in the winds of change. As usual, you entrance me with your words. 10 Karin Anderson
Bittersweet farewell. I agree with Cindy, its a powerful poem about the pain and drama of breaking up. Thank you for sharing :)
Very well written this Laurie - has all the pain and drama, a story of a breakup absolutely powerful with grim determination. Very sad though....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I like the way you have written this Laurie, a flowing piece written from the heart, 10 Lynda xx