gary hicinbothem

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Do Not Understand - Poem by gary hicinbothem

I do not understand, the pain of my loss is to much to handle,
all i say is, mommy drie your eyes,
mommy dont you cry all i wanna do is die,
i tell everyone who dont care about me to scramble,
it hurts that the words that ive said to her i connot say sorry,
the pain of my loss is to much to handle,
but i still love her even though she brings me pain,
even though my life is a game,
as days go bye i go insane more n more,
all over my body is sore why can't i just shut the door.


Comments about Do Not Understand by gary hicinbothem

  • Rookie Sebastine Humaemo (12/13/2008 6:06:00 AM)

    great poem....full of emotions mixed with love..thanks for shairng...sebastine (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Brianna Trombley (12/3/2008 10:18:00 PM)

    your love for this person is so powerful, the loss of her is killing you, this shows in all your writings (Report) Reply

  • Rookie life is all about happiness and peace (12/3/2008 9:48:00 AM)

    so dont let her go....b with her, as she wz with u since so many years....mothered u more than being love...dont let her go (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anita Blake (11/27/2008 11:11:00 AM)

    great poem. take care (Report) Reply

  • Rookie *Trusting You* (11/26/2008 3:23:00 PM)

    even though my life is a game,
    I feel that way... when my mom hurts me then says she is sorry over and over again. good job.
    Crystal (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amy (11/24/2008 11:24:00 AM)

    Great poem

    shows true heartfelt emotion


    good effort :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Annie Girl (11/24/2008 10:12:00 AM)

    i also feel like if my mom really cares about me u know.....

    nice work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Fiona Davidson (11/4/2008 4:18:00 PM)

    The emotion shines through this poem Gary.. well used words...thank you....xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie maggie murray (11/4/2008 3:06:00 PM)

    Gary, I feel your pain in this poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 3, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 27, 2008


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