Do U Miss Me Like The Way I Do? ? Poem by Fatima Obaid

Do U Miss Me Like The Way I Do? ?

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Once in the winter dusk
I thought about u
All jokes of you
You made for me,
I laughed and laughed
But then stopped
By thinking one question
Do u miss me like the way I do?
Once in the summer's night
I was sleeping a sound sleep
Then sudden woke up
Ade searched u everywhere
But you were only a dream
Then looked at my side
A dropp fallen with a question
Do u miss me like the way I do? ?
Once in the dawn of autumn
I dance beneath the falling leaves
In merrily style; then stopped at once
And thought of you
I down on knees and looked at sky
Do u miss me like the way I do? ?
Once in the morn of spring
I was walking in street
Thinking what I have
Everything was there except u
The I cried and said
Do u miss me like the way I do? ?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalida Bano Ali 06 October 2014

A nice poem I liked it.

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Susan Lacovara 04 November 2013

Beautiful sentiments in your words...I. could feel the sorrow of your heart. I invite you to read my poem, While Out Walking A Winding Road, which has similar emotion. Continue to share your gift. I have been writing since I was a very young girl, and your poetry reminds me of my own yesterdays...PEACE

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Auwal Abdullahi 22 November 2012

Well done, Fatima! Keep writing-it makes perfect.

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Shivani Misra 03 November 2012

It should be 'AND searched for you'. Overall' this was a nice piece and beautiful to read.

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