Do You Really Love Me? Poem by Dylan Gaudreault

Do You Really Love Me?

Rating: 5.0


She say she really love me,
when your lost in emotions so thugly,
that's firing slugs in me till the clip's empty,
can't she see how much she meant 2 me.

'i love you'

Again, there's another bullet, retract the question gotta hold it,
because im so quick to react to the fullest, with an i love you back
seems you give cold shoulders, with no time to relax

'I love you of course I want to spend time with you'

But do you really because this situation comes across as silly
blindly chasing, wondering if you feel me, why am i waiting
my hearts an open wound, heal me, forit'll get infected soon

'my love please-'

No! my heart just bleeds, shown no love,
so why now with the pleads
i told you, your my lone drug, the one i truly need,
i guess, i was to much of a thug,
used all your time to flee, stress and searching for love
was motivation enough to leave,
but I'm a sucker no matta how hard I try I can't leave
simply i love you...



2 be continued...

Monday, August 22, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: heartache
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dickson Mseti 23 August 2011

Your sinciality made this poem reality. Finish this poem I wish to see it's end.

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Romeo Della Valle 22 August 2011

Impressive! A few words well penned that have become like small sparks that start a huge fire! Only time can tell! Definitely, Poetry is on your blood! Keep it up! Keep giving us more of your talented writes! Thanks for sharing! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Stefanie Fontker 22 August 2011

Interesting, I like this. This is some great poetry. I will wait for your continuation.

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