Dogma Poem by Eric Cockrell

Dogma

Rating: 4.5


dogma...
mankind's attempts,
however feeble,
to draw the wings of the hawk
with broken crayons,
with which to fly.

never knowing they're
already flying!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miroslava Odalovic 26 May 2012

This is an outstanding piece of writing. Bitterly ironic as well. I loved the sharpness of your tone. It stood right where it should be.

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Dave Walker 23 May 2012

Short and sweet, like it.

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