Dolce Far Niente, A Sequel* Poem by indira babbellapati

Dolce Far Niente, A Sequel*

Rating: 3.2


remember our fog walk
of a winter morning...?

our hands closely clasped
spreading warmth into each other
we took each step together
into a zero visibility ahead
whenever a sudden wind
blew on our winter-bitten cheeks
didn't the clasp tighten?

how our fingers released
stars shining brighter
than those up above!

we took each step
with those stars guiding us...

* for karin anderson...thnq so much for suggesting a sequel. i lived each word that went into this...

10nov2009
12.24hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonya Florentino 10 November 2009

what a beautfiful breathtaking memory....and as I can see from the earlier poem, the feeling of warmth has carried you through cold days.....

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Priyanka Bhowmick 09 November 2009

these r such lovely lines.... gud attempt

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Ranjit Ravindran 09 November 2009

Nicely done. Liked these lines ........................................... we took each step with those stars guiding us... ...........................................

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indira babbellapati

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visakhapatnam, india
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