Don'T Go Too Far Poem by G.S.Vasu Kumar

Don'T Go Too Far

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Don’t leave me and go too far
When I wish to be near
Don’t be as far as
A distant shining star

My days waiting for you
Is like being stranded
In a bus stand with
No buses to catch

Don’t leave me and go too far
I will be waiting for you
Like the leaves for the
Dew drops

Don’t leave me even for
An hour
My eyelids would flutter
And then close to dream
About you as though
You are near

Don’t leave me even for
A second
I would like to share
My world with you
Till my time would
Come to an end

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joscephine Gomez 05 May 2007

Sounds sincere. I like the second stanza the most.

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Commendable work, G.S....Smooth, mellifluous construction...Stellar imagework. Well crafted penning... FjR

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