Don'T Pick On Emo's! ! ! ! Poem by I wish i was as invisable as he made me feel

Don'T Pick On Emo's! ! ! !

Rating: 4.8


You diss
I slit my wrist
When you cause me pain
I slit the left vain
You break my heart
That’s where it starts
When you pretend
To care
Well how do you dare
It’s just not fair
So I remain
So damn silent
See my stain
It was very violent
I’m just a shadow
A part of the past
A part that could never last
My trickling blood
Is dripping fast
I hear a thud
I just lie and stare
I cry
And wonder why
Why should I be the one to go
Oh, because I’m emo…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Red Blooded Black Hearted 05 November 2007

r u emo? i'm emo? ...? ...? ...? but i like this poem too.

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i know exactly what youre talking about!

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Jess Emogirl 16 February 2008

i feels like you cuz i am an emo. Dont be sad, dont care about ppl who pick on emo! i will kick their asses

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Flame6203E . 05 February 2008

i share your pain, your feelings your hurt i can relate to you

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Jorydan Gap 08 January 2008

its its phenomenal i mean im emo for my self buts thats phenomenal its a phenomenal poem will u be my friend?

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Amie-Lee ...... 19 November 2007

Good girl! This is a really good poem, not just 4 emos, but for anyone who gets treated unfairly or teased until they snap.

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Wandering Scarlet 08 November 2007

i may not be emo.....but i totally know wut it feels like to be picked on and basically treated as the dirt we walk on, i totally sympathize

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