Don'T You Feel Better Already? Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Don'T You Feel Better Already?



The only thing we have in common,
Is nothing.
And the more of that we share...
The better off we will be!
Think about it.
Don't you feel better already?
It's a weight lifted off my shoulders,
I know that!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 22 January 2008

how bout - is everything. like, maybe i missed the point; but doesn't that make more sense, given the recourse of your unfolding verse? love, sjg

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