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Karissa Earley

(october 18,1993 / cambridge ohio)

Dont know anymore

The distance is unbearable,
i just wish that he could see.
That things aren't getting better,
maybe were not meant to be.

I try my hardest to be happy,
i take his hand in mine.
But when theres no response,
i cant act like everythings fine.

I think of moving on,
as i quickly walk away.
I dont know what else to try,
I dont know what else to say.

It used to be so different,
we used to shine so bright.
But now as days pass by,
i dont think anything will be alright.

These days im feeling so alone;
i cant seem to stop crying.
Just like i cant;
save our love from dying.

Soon he stands before me,
with a half smile upon his lips.
And once again,
my heart it starts to rip.

I want him to see,
the pain within my stare.
I want him to show me,
that some part of him still cares.

I want him to look at me,
like he did in the begining.
A promising smile to let me know,
that my life is not ending.

Will this ever happen? ,
this i do not know.
Does he realy love me?
or will his false love continue to grow? .

Submitted: Thursday, October 15, 2009
Edited: Thursday, October 15, 2009

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  • Nia Schexnider (12/5/2013 5:14:00 PM)

    This is my problem too. I put so much on him, imagine he weren't your boyfriend and only your friend. Would you expect so much? You need to be happy by yourself, even though it's really hard- especially with an abusive or depressed past, but you are capable of more than being an ornament. :) be free. (Report) Reply

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