Doors I Never Close Poem by gershon hepner

Doors I Never Close

Rating: 4.8


Doors I never close
cause millions of regrets,
like yesteryears whose snows
no melting heart forgets.
A never-opened door
resembles tears unshed
which cannot fall before
the book of life is read.

3/1/06

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Gale 01 March 2006

I loved the last part about a never open door. Simple yet beautiful. Regards Patricia

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***** ********* 01 March 2006

Very gentle work gershon. I think many will relate, I always try to limit the regrets, but it takes stupidity or guts, I am not sure which. 10 from sleepy Tai

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Linda Ori 29 March 2006

The things we regret in life are the chances never taken -(the doors left unopened) . Wonderful, short and to the point - very powerful little poem Linda

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Emma Johnson 05 March 2006

And JUST make sure you NEVER close the doors of your poetry. Susie.

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Emma Johnson 05 March 2006

This poem has music, meaning, structure and metaphors - what I would call perfect. Ten. A favourite.

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Eila Mahima Jaipaul 02 March 2006

closing doors is so limiting Gershon.... -Eila

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Hugh Cobb 01 March 2006

Shalom, Gershon! This is an exquisite piece of writing. All the best, Hugh

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