Sylvia Chidi

Rookie - 84 Points (Germany)

Down To The Beach - Poem by Sylvia Chidi

Down to the beach
Down to the beach
On a sunny day we go
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Comments about Down To The Beach by Sylvia Chidi

  • Rookie Joseph Sanchez (4/28/2014 11:24:00 AM)

    Down to the beach
    Where young lovers closely nestle
    As sand creatures cause the sand to bristle
    Seagulls gliding in the air with screams and whistles
    Kids picking up shells and building stormy sand castles

    Down to the beach
    Where mostly good vibes flow
    Down to the beach
    We go whilst there is still sun without snow (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Jesse Donnellan (9/25/2013 1:31:00 PM)

    awesome poem love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jesse Donnellan (9/25/2013 1:30:00 PM)

    great poem never heardanything like it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Malik Ata (7/11/2012 6:30:00 PM)

    The poem is very creative; I like the fact that everything goes incline with everything else. When you started to talk about sun lotion made me realize why i hate the beach. The poem really makes me think about my own experience as a kid to the beach; picking up shells n what not. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Russell (4/24/2012 8:19:00 PM)

    This poem took me out of this cubicle and to a sandy haven. I wish I could read more like this at sharingpoetry.com. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie David Park (3/23/2012 3:45:00 PM)

    what a cool poems (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Marcella D (7/24/2009 8:33:00 AM)

    this is very nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bella Norton (9/20/2007 6:53:00 PM)

    i love this poem! it got a great vibe to it, one that can make someone happy! love it! (Report) Reply








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