Dream Bed Poem by Sonya Florentino

Dream Bed

Rating: 5.0


The rain falls heavy on my shoulders
The wind keeps blowing to the west
I have to fight to keep from falling
My faith in you my only strength

The road looms dark, cold and lonely
I can’t see much of what’s ahead
But I know I must keep believing
And you will take care of the rest

The snow weighs heavy on my shoulders
The cold has seeped into my chest
But I find comfort in your promise that
In heaven lies a bed
With a blanket warm as red
And the softest cloud to cradle my head

© 2009 Sonya Florentino

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The melancholy mood, especially the cold seeping into your chest is so effective. The triple rhyme at the end of the last three lines not only completes the poem beautifully, but give a snug cosy feel that everything is all right and you can stay in bed in heaven for ever....10 Karin Anderson

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Duh Huh 06 June 2009

Aww, this is so sweet Sonya. I love it. Faith can move mountains and lead us from the darkest places. Very well done and thank you for sharing :)

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Laurie Hill 02 June 2009

Your faith is strong, to take you through the darkness, through despair to a wonderful resting place....beautiful......10+

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 01 June 2009

Yea one must stick to the faith, as drowning man cling to a floatsam............A Good Write...............

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Kesav Easwaran 01 June 2009

'...must keep believing And you will take care of the rest'... subtle message inside...the last stanza lines read really nice...Sonya, i liked...10

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Sonya Florentino

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Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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