naida supnet

Veteran Poet - 1,442 Points (bayambang, pangasinan, philippines)

Dream Coffee Moment - Poem by naida supnet

I WISH to have a coffee moment
With no other than a president
Barrack Obama is a fine choice
And hear his thoughts and plans and voice.

P-noy will be my next coffee-mate
Might find out who will be his date
Might find out too how is it like
To have a sports car and a bike

Morning with Elizabeth the Queen
In the palace garden so serene
Who knows she might lend me her crown
I’ll grab the chance without a frown

Dan Brown is my next in line
Because I love his books they shine
While sipping coffee he’ll foresee
To include me in his next story

An idol judge Simon Cowell
Oh no my heart might burst might swell
Beside him in that center table
I might be choosing the next Idol

Then also there’s Stephen King
I know for sure my heart will sing
The author of the shades of Grey
My sleeping hours she took away

The new Miss world Miss Megan Young
Charming beauty my jaw would hang
Or Lady Gaga with amazing clothes
I’ll be in shock a hundred folds

Few moments with the vampire ladies
Few moments with immortal beauties
Sookie, Elena and Bella Swan
Good-looking men come one by one

Coffee moment short precious time
Sounds great to me sounds like a chime
If only I could I’ll make it true
So I could have my time with you


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Funny but it's true, I want to have my coffee moment with many people, and these are just few. It would take me a long time writing all the names.But anyway, I smiled all throughout my writing of this poem, I hope you will feel the same way.

Comments about Dream Coffee Moment by naida supnet

  • Gold Star - 8,906 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/19/2013 10:27:00 AM)

    Hi Naida!
    Please keep a slot for me too! :)
    The poem is funny but the idea is great! Good rhyme, good language, a well articulated poem, gets 10/10 from me.
    Keep writing, my friend! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 10 Points Troy Ulysses Davis (10/15/2013 6:55:00 PM)

    Beautiful piece. Not a bad invitation either. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 287 Points marvin brato (10/6/2013 11:26:00 PM)

    Succinct narration of imaginary moments having coffee moment with great and special people! Well-penned. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Deepak Sawhney (10/6/2013 11:20:00 PM)

    Hey Naida. Brilliant...great humour. What more can I say... I sense a total transformation in your writing style, content, technicality as well as rhythm & rhyme. Enjoyed it thoroughly. Surely a 10/10. Sorry don't get too much time. Do accept my apologies (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 6, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, October 7, 2013


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