Dream Girl Poem by Corey Fauchon

Dream Girl

Rating: 4.8


The whole day we were on a carousel;
Ever since we met I've under her spell;
She lights the fire inside me;
I believe she is the missing key

She is able to read me like a book;
She can do this with a single look;
I know there are others she'd rather be with;
Maybe everything I believe could be a myth

She'd rather work to put food on the table;
She hates listening to the old fable;
She never liked to be kept in the dark;
We take aim together & take out the mark

She gets her rocks off when in trouble;
She never lets anyone come & burst her bubble;
She knows when what I say may be wrong;
But she always says that 'Life is way too long'

She likes the thrill of a fight with a mussive punch;
We both like the fight, she enjoys the crunch;
We never argue, we are both sick of it;
Every conflict ends with her with a cigarette

She is the one I've been looking for, The One;
I can't find her, I've never really had fun;
I won't rest 'til I can hold her in my arms tight;
I'll be stuck in the tunnel, I won't reach the light

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Angel Stein 21 September 2009

this is a great poem but it kind of seems like your trying to hard to ryhme try using a website or book that could help with your ryhme scheme :)

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Corey Fauchon

Corey Fauchon

Newcastle, NSW, Australia
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