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Awakened in haste,
I threw my cotton sheets
into random creases, capturing
my startled dreams.
Later, in the dark cool
stillness I unfolded
that dream soaked sheet.
Each previous tale
of slumber flew
through me, piercing
my silent core.
Naturally, my daily events
and nightly visions unite,
Astaire and Rogers
twirling in the twilight.
So then, dear conscience
where is day
and when is night?
Cheryl Lynn Moyer
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Sunday, July 08, 2007 |
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Saturday, March 19, 2011 |
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Comments about this poem (Dream Pockets
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Cheryl Lynn Moyer
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Mel Vincent Basconcillo (4/27/2009 10:10:00 PM)
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this is so relaxing to read..u make me have dreams even though i am wide awake! marvelous poem!
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Sarah Abdullah (12/14/2008 5:20:00 AM)
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So then, dear conscience
where is day
and when is night?
I just Love it
Simply love it...it is indeed Capturing...
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Saint Cynosure (11/20/2008 8:42:00 PM)
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Cheryl, I really like this one a lot...
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Edgar Andrade Baguio (11/16/2008 6:33:00 AM)
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The last three lines are very striking to a 'sleepy' mind to reach out some dreams.
Nice one Cher!
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Don Mcwilliams (3/2/2008 9:07:00 AM)
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Very interesting, particularly the melding of mundane and mystical. Nicely done, Cheryl.
Regards,
Don
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Chad Halle (1/3/2008 9:06:00 PM)
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i really like this, it captures time and is smooth.
i enjoy quite a bit of your poems actually.
-chad
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Barry Van Allen (8/22/2007 3:13:00 AM)
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Cheryl,
I know that you did not expect an answer,
but, I have one for you anyhow,
... the day and night are still in the same place,
... and still in the same time,
right there in those creases of your dreams...
- - - twirling in the twilight...
deep into the night, with any luck at all.
B.V.A.
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Michael Ardizzone (8/21/2007 8:03:00 AM)
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Simple and elegant, I enjoyed this poem. Dreams are such slippery things, to catch them in bed sheets would be so nice...
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Anita . (7/29/2007 12:19:00 AM)
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hey, great write. take care
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Roger Bowman (7/20/2007 5:39:00 PM)
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I love this poemo.
take good care
Roger
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