Dream While You'Re Awake! Poem by Subbaraman N V
Dream While You'Re Awake!
Dream while you're awake
To build the world you want to make
Help plan the steps you need to take
First few to taste the success cake!
Build the castles in the air
Ambition level kept in the golden chair
Castles of excellence well taken care
Ultimate results one can not compare!
Dreaming while awake
Building castles in the air
Are but initial steps in its wake
To be fine tuned to the needs with care!
Steps to follow surely needs
Will and wit, vision and mission
Power and strength - delightful deeds
Bound to take your dream to fruition!
Very well written. Yes, we all can relate to this. Thank you for sharing.
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4/24/2024 2:00:48 AM # 1.0.0.1119
The words here flow so beautifully as in a melodious song. Dreaming while awake Building castles in the air Are but initial steps in its wake To be fine tuned to the needs with care! The way the first two stanzas have been weaved together here in the above four lines is remarkable. The last stanza is filled to the brim with worldly wisdom. A great composition, indeed!