Dreamers' Nightmare Poem by Juneil Sechico

Dreamers' Nightmare

Rating: 5.0


We are now devided by the bluest sea,
Gentle blow of the wind took you away from me,
The brightest star is now out of my sight;
Sun is refusin' to give its light.

When will the the rainbow bridge our gap?
When will the sun kiss the mountain top?
When will the rain refrain from kissin' my cheeks?
When will the healer alleviate my aches?

Fog is blockin' the way,
Defoliation is now the suffering of the lonely tree,
The poetic poet lost its word;
The rhymeful poem lost its rhyme.

The lachrymatories are filled with mourners' tears;
THe mocking bird decided to be a wailer,
Chocolate became more bitter than burned pie,
The dreamers wailed when you said goodbye.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cindy Velasquez 17 April 2009

i just love the second stanza, you manage to keep the rhyme in the poem.

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Fathmath Sana 11 April 2009

nice poem! i loved reading it! weldone! and keep it up! and please dropp your eyes on one of my poems+ vote them! ! ! ! sana 1000000000000000000000000/1000000000000000000000000

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.... I don't even know what to say. I would guess that your imagination is very vivid. Especially with how descriptive the poem is. Keep up the great work! ~R-D-F~Rawr. <3

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Juneil Sechico

Juneil Sechico

Bayabas, Cagayan de Oro City
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