Dreaming Poem by Hustle Struggle

Dreaming

Rating: 5.0


I always had a dream about making it in life/and my sister was the one who encouraged me to fight/to never give up until i finally make it/then keep on going till i became the greatest/then i can say like sean im finally famous/witing verses in my phone trying hard to be patient/performing for my friends for a lil entertainment/then watch as they stare in shock & amazement/my words paint a picture Marina Abramovic/ then dive in your soul you can call it sky diving/mama said the hardest part about fame it's the part recognizing/and friends will come around but you gotta analyze them/katie said she loves me but its only been a month/and i told her love hurts because it happend to me once/my ex sent me a message saying that she miss me/and I'm still trying to figure when the hell I went missing/but ima live my life cause I only live once/and ima live it up me & my speople said dont like me and i say thats nice/but as for now im chillen in club paradise/

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 24 June 2012

A very deep and moving write that is both, well penned and poignant! This very analytically crafted write clearly shows your potential in the Poetry World my dear friend! 10+++Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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