Dreamland Poem by Cathy Smith

Dreamland

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that same day i thought
i caught you hanging up on
the telephone and bought you
some flowers to tell you that i knew
that that was you on the phone
i didn’t want to be too subtle
the flowers should
have been larger better
prettier for you
there wasn’t any letter in my box
today beyond dreaming i reached in
and felt around the
metal sides the box
was empty except for a
few letters informing me of
forthcoming sales god
i hope i’m not being a
fool you know that probably
wasn’t even you on the phone

Dreamland
Thursday, November 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love,relationships
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this poem is actually about living in Hollywood, California (ie Dreamland) and is a double metaphor for a disappointing relationship.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 19 March 2016

Prettier for you. Thanks for sharing.

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Nehla Jameel 17 March 2016

Nyc poem....i lyk it

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