Dreams Poem by Sad Truth

Dreams

Rating: 4.3


When nothing seems right
Every days a fight
When the only thing you look for
Is the coming night
Then it’s alright...? !

When nothing makes sense
A barbed wire fence
Wrapped around your heart
That’s not even the start...

To end it all
I wished for this dream
To live as nothing
A darkened gleam...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 01 September 2008

I don't really recommend this one because I believe the reader might want a bit more substance on the bones of this one. GW62

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Starr Downing 25 August 2008

i like this one it has a nice flow

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