///Dreams///In[[[london-Paris-Moscow]]] Poem by ahmed khaled

///Dreams///In[[[london-Paris-Moscow]]]

Rating: 5.0


in london dreams
i saw time
a pearl, not so rounded
buried in the sand of beach
whisperingly, waiting...
for no tomorrow

in paris dreams
i saw time
a golden_breast woman
the perfume of her mouth
was coming from...
a sweet heavenly orange

in moscow dreams
i saw time
a hat, rising from snow
fighting against all fire
just to remain cold...
on the head of yesterday

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elena Sandu 04 October 2011

Your poems are very intriguing, you leave the door open to us giving the freedom of true art, that of interpretation.One of mine could be: the unfairness in this world could be seen even in dreams. Hat off for your write.Thank you,10

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Adeline Foster 29 September 2011

Any where we can dream is home. Read mine - Home Is - Adeline

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Allemagne Roßmann 21 September 2011

No place is the best place to live when it came to me dreams of earth... I cannot have the mobility to live in Mars..i need something and somebody-security. Well said and well written poem here

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Allemagne Roßmann 21 September 2011

No place is the best place to live when it came to me dreams of earth... I cannot have the mobility to live in Mars..i need something and somebody-security. Well said and well written poem here

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Unwritten Soul 20 September 2011

Collision of three dreams seems like three different dreams to chase...Anywhere we know that there also having different good and bad as high and low...Love represent Paris, London as Elite lifestyle and Russian as known as great history holder..Actually i think you tried to say that the place is such having imbalance good dream, maybe you hoping behind all the places and dreams it's good to combine all as one place as one dream...you want enjoy all of this dreams...For me, every place has it's specialty and uniqueness we cant get all in one..Just like individual as human, we are varied and that 's make us need each other..what we need be united to taste all of this..So what you think? _Unwritten Soul

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