* * * Dremlike * Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

* * * Dremlike *

Rating: 3.5


Blue star- your shine fantastically...
And singing for the moon is so lovely...
The morning star- you are hope for day-
Disappeared fast together with at night...
Don't shine so strongly...blue star-
You are dreamlike so, and blue air...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 23 February 2009

I love this Tsira, blue star, wilful moon...10

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Fiona Davidson 23 February 2009

Beautiful as always Tsira...thank you...10+++

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Catrina Heart 23 February 2009

dream like you..beautiful words Tsira...lovely piece...10+++++

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Costa Anakiev 10 April 2009

Tsira, again a lovely mixture of mistakes. Konstantin.

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Sonya Florentino 15 March 2009

i've had similar conversations with stars.... :)

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Sandra Fowler 26 February 2009

Night music both wistful and poignant. You are in good poetic voice in this one. 10, of course. Kind regards, Sandra

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Andrew Blakemore 24 February 2009

A lovely wistful poem Tsira, a pleasure to read. Love, Andrew x

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Lynda Robson 23 February 2009

Your poem like the title has a dreamlike quality to it, well versed Tsira, 10 Lynda xx

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