Driftwood Poem by Chris Bradshaw

Driftwood

Rating: 5.0


Your name is written down here
On this broken piece of wood
I carved it out in silence
To hold you longer than I should

But this blade is not a weapon
It's a tool of deep regret
Cutting through, to cleave in two
A heart with nothing left

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subroto Chatterjee 15 April 2009

Hmmmmm....Too many sad stuff you got there, my friend! That's probably driving the poet in you.... But they are good, sad stuff....human emotions after all. We are all part of this game, anyways! Cheers. Subroto

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Tom Balch 17 December 2008

A lovely piece albeit sad,10 regards Tom

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