Drinking Poem by Poetheart Morgan

Drinking

Rating: 4.8


drinking in a golden cup
licking the brim
Oh! licking the brim

deeper ~watering my lips~
round drops, translucent
~wanting and waiting~

i swallow the flesh
soaked in wine
dressed in purple

searching for a touch
in a golden cup
remembering that i dissolve
in my purple color

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sekharan Pookkat 19 November 2013

Used symbol is uncommon but should be prized for its significance And aptness of the context for the the title as well as content

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Bri Edwards 20 November 2013

i HAVE the slightest idea what you are talking about. i usually like to have MORE than a slight idea what a poem means, BUT with this poem, i don't care. i enjoyed it...........though i do have comments (more) for P.M. which i will send to her as a message. gotta read it again! i'll send to MyPoemList.......at least for it's uniqueness...and more. thanks for sharing. :) i also don't understand the comment (below) by s. pookkat. i'm probably just a dummy!

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Poetheart Morgan 20 November 2013

Neither you, nor I or anyone! ! ! I think! Thanks for your lovely comment Poet!

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Sallam Yassin 21 November 2013

when you are drinking the desire the the desire is drinking you and drinking in you you became in three/ and there is more....... in your golden CUP

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Anthony Burkett 31 January 2014

Very...Verrrrrry... Sensual!

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Guy Dimitri Jagodinski 10 December 2013

Vewry unique and a great read.

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Nader Baheri 29 November 2013

hard to understand whats this poem about BUT easy to enjoy.love it~nb

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James Mclain 28 November 2013

Lips open closed spread together. Around the long green neck. Filling pouches that she holds....iip

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Heather Wilkins 21 November 2013

a good write Maybe a metaphor I am not sure.

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