Driving Range (Senryu) Poem by Govind Ramakrishnan

Driving Range (Senryu)



on green astroturf
a sea of white marshmallows;
hot chocolate please!

© 2016

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gil Highlander 24 July 2016

i can picture all the golf balls looking from afar like marshmallows. The introduction of chocolate was a masterpiece. that was a great cut in the senryu.

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Kelly Kurt 24 July 2016

A little warm for that drink now, but the imagery was flawless

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Guru Kothandaraman 24 July 2016

Fun imagery. Marshmallows and chocolate are a great combination.

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