Drowning Poem by joy williams
Drowning
I'm feeling your vibes
I feel as if they captured more than my heart
It has penetrated into my soul
Causing three words to overflow from my heart
Now dripping from my lips
Now submerging you in my love
You find it hard to breathe
But you would gladly die tonight
From drowning in my love
Joy Williams aka £yricxpression™
© January 2009 All Rights Resevered
Intensity of love and an articulate impression about fall in love. This is a poem made by passion. Excellent and keep writing.
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4/19/2024 6:26:59 PM # 1.0.0.1119
But you would gladly die tonight From drowning in my love The writing reminds me the climax of Browning's 'Last Ride Together'. I am telling about the climax, not the total poem. Your spirit of this writing is certainely different from that. But you have won the game of catching the readers heart. Utterance of three words can change the whole existence of an individual. Yes, climax related with that moment of uttering. But your hypothetical and projected catastrophe is beautiful. Better she can die...Fantastic poet. My choice is high here. Thank you. 10