Dust Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

A poem that speaks about the atoms of love...even those contained in the dust. I liked it a lot.

Melodious and fine poems, Nightingale... Gallant... 10... Tsira

We were mold from the dust So we all go back to the dust Nice poem..10.

Ashes to ashes, dust to dust, another lovely write from you, 10 Lynda xx

The readers will have a hard time finding the connection between these lines. The rhymes abnd rhythm are fine and worthy. There must be a connection between them that the reader discerns immediately. Life is short. Do not force a reader to spend life time searching. You would not wish to either. Even minutes, is too long. GW62

STONE BREAKS AT THE ENDS OF TIME. WITH A MIGHT BOOM TOGETHER I WILL BE WITH YOU AT LAST.....TO START ALL OVER AGAIN IN SANDS OF TIME AS SEED OF TEARDROPS OF LOVE IN YOUR EYES wow you are timeless... such beautiful poem..

What you have said in few lines is difficult to write in a whole book... I love your way with words... The empty space between planets Contains measurable amounts of dust Beautiful indeed... Regards, Kamran

Easy to understand and not to forget. Good piece of work

Simple words, but yet such a magnificent poem. So beautiful is all I can say.

i.e.u so beautiful and fantistic word!