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Dust

A cloud of dust rises in the air
The trees bend double by the gust

The empty space between planets
Contains measurable amounts of dust

When it’s rainy or dewy
Don’t stride with thrust

That’s my heart on the ground
In the color of the rust

(2008/10/12)

Submitted: Sunday, October 12, 2008
Edited: Friday, December 05, 2008

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  • Randy Hogan (1/11/2009 4:01:00 PM)

    STONE BREAKS AT THE ENDS OF TIME. WITH A MIGHT BOOM
    TOGETHER I WILL BE WITH YOU AT LAST.....TO START ALL OVER AGAIN
    IN SANDS OF TIME AS SEED OF TEARDROPS OF LOVE IN YOUR EYES
    wow you are timeless... such beautiful poem..

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  • palas kumar ray (10/26/2008 5:51:00 AM)

    Deep philosophy that makes you rewind your deeds.

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  • Dr Kamran Haider (10/26/2008 4:07:00 AM)

    What you have said in few lines is difficult to write in a whole book... I love your way with words...

    The empty space between planets
    Contains measurable amounts of dust

    Beautiful indeed...

    Regards, Kamran

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  • Elle B (10/24/2008 12:54:00 PM)

    Easy to understand and not to forget. Good piece of work

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  • Triin Kann (10/22/2008 8:24:00 AM)

    Simple words, but yet such a magnificent poem. So beautiful is all I can say.

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  • Leon & Sarah Harris (10/18/2008 5:27:00 PM)

    i.e.u so beautiful and fantistic word!

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (10/18/2008 9:36:00 AM)

    A v e r y beautiful poem.
    10 for it.

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  • Sarah Abdullah (10/15/2008 2:06:00 PM)

    Loved how you made the word(Dust) able to be related to million things and million feelings

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  • Annie Girl (10/15/2008 10:38:00 AM)

    so organized thoughts nice

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  • Ershad Mazumder (10/15/2008 9:24:00 AM)

    I love your poem.Iran is the global HQ of poetry.

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