(e) 13 (Dark) This Is The End Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(e) 13 (Dark) This Is The End

Rating: 3.4


As the girdle of time
digs sharply into my flesh

As the black veil of my existence
hides the impermeable Truth

As the flame of my thoughts move in
rapid circles and become a mere line

As the vulture of pervading questions
devour my almost dead body

As the furnace of my yearning
bakes it into a solemn comprehension

That this is the Enddddddddddd.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Asma Bahrainwala 15 January 2007

amazing images here... i esp liked this one- 'As the vulture of pervading questions/ devour my almost dead body' Asma...

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Geoff Warden 14 January 2007

This is indeed a deep set poem, , , , , , , , , and I enjoyed, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , well done,

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 14 January 2007

AWESOME WORK....The Darkside of T.O.....my, my, ....im likin' it, oh yes! You; re too young, but your verse takes me back to 1967 and Jim Morrison of the Doors....Had A song called 'The End'...it too was awesome....One of my favourite listens, still to this day.....As you are one of my favourite Reads.... fjr

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Linda Ori 14 January 2007

Never say never, TO. Interesting piece. I feel your frustration, but it is only fleeting - trust me. Maybe the end is only the beginning? Linda

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Ernestine Northover 14 January 2007

I do hope not TO, we would miss you too much. Interesting write, some very deep feelings in this one. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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