(e) 2 (Dark) The Abyss Beckons Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(e) 2 (Dark) The Abyss Beckons

Rating: 4.3


The abyss yawns and beckons....
Its so easy to dropp in
To just give up the resistance
And get drawn
by the magnetic force within....
Feel the joy of the sheer slide
as you go deep down
Did you indulge in all sins?
Did you revere the demons?
Just close your eyes
and enjoy the slide
Listen to the sound
of your soul's laughter
mocking you.....
Make the soul flee
from your body
Revel in it
Dwell in it
Celebrate your freedom
Now no need to abstain from
any form of sin
Let the journey begin....


****** Inspired by Jim Morrison ******

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Gale 15 January 2007

Awesome piece to start the week T.O. well done!

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 15 January 2007

A W E S O M E...TIS ALL FROM THE TITLE TO THE FINAL.......................CALL T.O.>>>>MISTER MOJO.......--===='''''''''''*******RISING WOULD SAY'WEEEEL, ALL-RRRRIGHT, NOW! FJR..............................

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Nic Velarde 15 January 2007

i like this one...it produces a connection to the reader.

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Asma Bahrainwala 15 January 2007

hmm...the abyss does beckon! ! ...reading this poem even more so! ! ! ! :) Asma...

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Now THIS is what I like to read on a Monday morning... licence to go forth and LIVE! ! ! ! Full of abandon, this liberating piece from your stylish pen. t x

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