E’fiancee's Poem Poem by saadat tahir

E’fiancee's Poem

Rating: 5.0


Down memory lane with lines I wrote
On the waves of which my life’s afloat
Many a times my rhythm flip flopped
with eyes I picked and hastily dropped
A dazzling gem amids glittery stone
From far off lands alone he shone
Many would have caught my eyes glint
They may’ve thought so, but no I dint
Few with words, he is debonair, bold
He is the one I always wanted to hold
The glint of his eyes has had me told
blush of my cheek; he is lost and sold
he speaks softly by my wanting ear
my eyes he finds like a yearling dear
I hold his hand to alight my ride
I cherish him to be forever my side
'I worship you love, my H to be
I blink in your glow for all to see'
what he says goes deep in my heart
and I pray to GOD we are never apart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meena Mustafa 27 July 2012

another great poem... Doc sure did change his role lol...

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Roong S 10 July 2012

Great poem..wonderfully written! !

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Indira Babbellapati 20 July 2011

doc changed roles! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 07 July 2011

Great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. I really liked and rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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