Eaglewise Poem by Juneil Sechico

Eaglewise

Rating: 4.8


I'll soar above the storms of life,
Won't quit 'til I win over the fight;
Find strength through my mystic eyes,
Have feast in the heart of rainbow sky.

Won't let the thunder's roar rule over me;
I'll find the sun to kiss the bluest sea;
With blissful heart, I'll live in one day;
Timeless joy will keep me in tranquility.

I will bounce back higher if I fall,
Spread my wings and fly proudly tall;
Blazing heart will keep me propelling,
Burning desire will keep me dreaming.

Failure isn't meant to be my ending,
Nor weights can disable my humble wings;
Cargoes can't make me heavily laden,
But will fuel me to win the game.

I'll fly toward my starry dream,
Not for the kudos' sake of my name,
But because that is I meant to be,
To activate the true nature of me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ana Guerrero 21 March 2009

I love it great job its very....it describes how I feel at times

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very splendid write.....

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Maitreyee Joshi 21 March 2009

very optimistic.good

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Alex Gomez 21 March 2009

It was a very well written piece and I enjoyed it. Inspirational sort of.

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Jerry Abrahamson 21 March 2009

Great job. Keep going.

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Alf Hutchison 01 May 2009

Yes Juneil...what would it be like to soar with eagles... a splendid topic well done...Alf

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Catrina Heart 30 March 2009

Young man you have your talent shinning...your words were a bit strong animated having a nice end rhymes...THanks

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Christina Smith 30 March 2009

I love your words and the way you express yourself it shows the type of person you are inside when you can show that you won't give up! 9/10 brilliant you have really taught me that words are the most dramatic and important part of a fantastic poem! ! !

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Ency Bearis 30 March 2009

great poem..nicely written/rhymes....

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passion davis 24 March 2009

amazing incredible..............i can learn more from you

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Juneil Sechico

Juneil Sechico

Bayabas, Cagayan de Oro City
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