! ...Earth Poem by Seema Aarella

! ...Earth

Rating: 5.0


On one fateful evening
Of our calmly fading lives
Gripped by unknown despair
With tears you proclaimed
That final flickers of light
Will be departed with the dying sun

While I sat timidly anticipating
The flow of eloquent verse
Full of emotional incessancy,
Strangely you falsified my hope
With the script of an epitaph
And surprised my sensibility

If death is your inevitable wish
To escape the afflicting domains
Believe me I will lay bare myself
As yards of benumbed earth
Infuse your concealed tears and
Integrate with your mortal remains! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C T Heart 13 November 2008

Death is something that only He could deem...a 10 from me Seema.

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Livingston David 13 November 2008

hm....... its good dede. really life in earth is like this

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Chitra - 13 November 2008

realms of deep thinking opened through these profound lines! truth well depicted!

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R.k Das 14 November 2008

here is a poem which can be read and appreciated over and over again..

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Kesav Easwaran 27 December 2008

This earth along with us is dying out slowly, Seema...for want of kindness compassion love and good will...on account of wounds inflicted by we earthlings... good write, thematic...good use of allegory...10

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Johnson Mathew 17 December 2008

Hey seema you are a sweet heart amazing.......how do you get ideas....for the poems..i just loved it...

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Sarwar Chowdhury 16 November 2008

Oh seema! what a poem! ! ! weightful composition! Lovely! ! 10++++

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Anjali Sinha 14 November 2008

like rk --I too will say the same that your poem is to be read and read and read and read a 100 times A+ and 10+ love anju

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 14 November 2008

the poem of you is good as sugar is sweet. revolutionery spirit in love and passion is shown with poerful words.

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