Earth Rotating I Saw Poem by Upendra Majhi

Earth Rotating I Saw

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The sky- Ganges flows above my head
I at 8000 metres above the earth,
The river 1000meter above me,
the white stream flow closely tight
the black cloud flows fast,
all towards east in restlessness,
The shadows of clouds fall on earth,
western to the clouds,
Rivers on earth seen in their serpentine curl,

Thursday, June 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: sky
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Allport 06 July 2017

a poem with a feel of an out of this world experience? .............well written.

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Upendra Upm 15 August 2017

Thank you Tom.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 June 2017

Beautiful poem based on scince. One can't imagine the moving of earth if he isn't above the earth more than 8000 metres. Thanks for sharing.

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Upendra Upm 27 June 2017

Thank you for your kind comments.

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White Cloud 22 June 2017

A very good poem. Thanks for posting it,

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Upendra Upm 27 June 2017

Thank you Mr.Cloud.

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